Script Analysis

With over ten years as a script consultant, and a five star rating as a story doctor, David Hohl brings screenwriters of all levels the needed boost to get market ready. Both his reasonable fee, and very personal attention has made David a well sought after consultant and mentor.  David has done script analysis for studio writers to screenplay newbies. His personal and attentive touch will bring your project to the next level.

*Five star rated consultant at Script Pipeline

*Preferred Consultant at Ink Tip

Script Analysis for your feature

  1. A complete, multiple reading of your script (once for flow, pacing, and readability, and the second for detailed story analysis.)
  2. Advanced script notes or Recorded Audio Notes on your script, suggestions on how to improve your re-write and get it ready for sale. Provided in a detailed MP3 for you to listen during your commute, or whenever convenient. Notes on arc, theme, dialogue, pace, commercial potential, etc.
  3. A script matrix graphic explaining how you were ranked in certain areas
  4. Email support if you have questions on the notes
  5. Guaranteed work by David Hohl, not an intern or assistant
  6. Discount on Future drafts
  7. Marketing Suggestions


“Your comments about the main characters arc were especially helpful. Most important to me, you understood what I was trying to accomplish and gave vital suggestions for developing the script’s potential. I look forward to working with you in the future and I’d recommend your services to any aspiring screen writer.”

-Robert Hendrickson (writer of SAY GOODNIGHT, ROMEO)

“As a beginning screenwriter, Mr. Hohl’s professional insight guided me in developing a marketable property. His constructive analysis was thorough, and his enthusiasm inspired me to work harder to create my vision. After using David Hohl’s HotScripts twice, I give my highest recommendation. His reasonable fees are money well spent.”

-Ari Mello (Writer of CAESAR)

“David knows how to hone in on a script’s weaknesses and was willing to custom–taylor my coverage for specific questions I had. Your money is well spent here.” -Jay

Note: Jay’s script was optioned after analysis. “David’s script analysis helped me look at my screenplay from a new perspective, allowing a more creative and solid re-writing process. I’d suggest using him before any rewrite, and certainly before sending any script out to market.”

-Martin Wheeler (Produced Writer of: 7 Seconds, Black Dawn, The Detonator)

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